poisondusk - 21 Aug 2007 02:05 pm

And the first chapter ends.

I'm reasonably happy with this - my art is a bit changeable, as is usual for me, but it should start to settle down (for a while, at least.) I had a lot of trouble scripting this, and I'm not entirely pleased with it in the end, but the next chapter should work better, because I've changed the narrative style a little, and the planning is better. I have all but the last few pages scripted.

This page, by the way, was an absolute pain (the last panel was, specifically) but I think it worked. I hope so, anyway.

arthy (Guest) - 22 Oct 2007 05:00 pm

hey hey great comic
i wish i had the time and patience for this kind of stuff.
great stuff!
arthy
p.s. see you next archery club ;)