Finally an update! This page was a bit of a nightmare to draw, which was part of the problem, along with my fast approaching exams. The first chapter is nearly finished now (another three pages, unless I make any major adjustments to the script) and I can finally get everything moving properly.
Thanks! I hope it's not too confusing so far (even though a lot of it will be explained in the next chapter, I worry about how much sense it makes at the moment...)